Forbes,+Gary

I am going to use this wiki space to help me learn more about the books I am reading. Also to help me study for my vocabulary If I go on vacation or if i am not in school, I could send my eassys and work from my phone; that way none of my work will be late.

Capitalize the "i" in sentences 1 & 3 "Also to help me study for my vocabulary." is a fragment/incomplete sentence Put a comma after "school" in sentence 3 Correct the misspelled word in sentence 3 Change the comma in sentence 3 to a semi-colon Put a period at the end of sentence 3